I think that's a solid approach. Now, draft an engaging opening, introduce the setting and characters effectively, build suspense, and end with a hook.
I should also hint at underlying mysteries. Why the sudden tension at the studio? What's the significance of the studio in her story? Maybe introduce a cliffhanger at the end of the draft to entice readers. I think that's a solid approach
The iron gates of Doberman Studio creak open at Cora’s touch. Once a forgotten film studio, now a haven for secrets. Its faded sign creaks in the wind, the name "Doberman" etched in jagged letters. The studio, once a place of art, now feels like a prison of its own making. Cora’s breath fogs in the cold night air as she steps inside. Why the sudden tension at the studio
The studio could be a key location. Maybe she has an affair with someone connected to a studio, or she's involved in a cover-up related to the studio. Maybe the Doberman Studio is a location where evidence is hidden or a place where important dialogues occur. The iron gates of Doberman Studio creak open